Assignment Paper

so the version im give you right now is a rough draft of my essay and I need help editing it making it better
What is your connection to the Yawanawa tribe? Why did you decide to interview and who exactly did you interview? That is not established in intro. Read prompt carefully to ensure you write what is needed in the intro.

Write a title that conveys the contents of your essay. The title should be original and not simply related to subject that’s being discussed. Also, define what TEK is in the intro rather than waiting until half way through the essay.

First 2.5 pages includes much information which clearly came from somewhere, yet there’s no textual evidence cited. Cite the definition of TEK as it’s not common knowledge.

Essay needs headings to indicate each of the levels of the assignment. Label as indicated in the PDF that discusses the case study.

Concluding paragraph is brief. Also is that part of Level 4, the historiography? Essay doesn’t need a traditional conclusion in this case.

Tian, your ideas are good as they do address TEK. However, it seems that there’s a disconnect between your essay and the prompt as it’s unclear if, when, and where someone was interviewed. Ensure you read the assignment prompt carefully, cite from the sources required, follow MLA format closely, and add headings.