Feedback Notes
• Please be sure your project represents a “PROCESS” improvement change (addition, deletion, or revision of some new or existing process). For instance, think car assembly line. You are implementing a plan to paint the doors before putting them on the car because that might save minutes of production time that way. You might measure effectiveness/efficiency of this change in “time of production.” You are going to track the time it takes to produce a car before and after the change. If it saves five minutes, then your change is working. If it adds five minutes, then it is not making the process more efficient, and you would have to reevaluate. This is simply an unrealistic example to help illustrate how you should be thinking about this project.
• Be sure to explain the metric you are using, why it is important, and how it relates to the “Process” you are improving.
• Please delete unnecessary course instructions throughout the document. These are only provided to help you in formulating your paper, but they do not need to be included in the completed assignment. Please remove throughout, where applicable.
• Please review for any grammatical and/or spelling issues. Please ensure spelling is correct and all grammatical devices are used correctly. Be sure to verify that commas are used appropriately, especially after introductory clauses and when listing items. It may be helpful to have someone proofread for you or to read it aloud. These are practices that help me catch super small issues.
• Please delete unnecessary spaces between paragraphs, graphs, content, etc. The added space generally detracts from the readability and overall presentation of a document. This is often accomplished by deleting extra spaces, shifting graphs up or down, etc. By ensuring the document is presented in a clear, clean, and well-organized manner, you will help to support and promote your ideas to the reader (many times your bosses in organizations). Review and revise such issues throughout the document.
• Review all items for consistency with regards to fonts, sizes, spacing, etc. This aids in presentation and promotes readability.
• Please be consistent with the use of names and terms: U.S. Air Force or Air Force are used sometimes interchangeably-pick one. Maintaining consistency is very helpful for the reader.
• Once you identify an acronym upon the very first use, continue using it.
• Provide a reference list that matches the citations used in-text.
• Items contained in the document that are from sources must be supported through attribution(s) to a provided reference(s) using an in-text citation(s) in APA (7th Edition) format. Such evidence is critical toward supporting our ideas, suggestions, and/or recommendations. Further, anything we get from another source (unless we personally completed the study or experiment ourselves) must be ascribed to an original author or source. Please review the content and cite every place where applicable. Please use the below website for additional information, if needed: